[8:05:37 PM] Sharon: also a teensy bit of sadomasochism in writing that
[8:05:38 PM] Sharon: :I
[8:05:53 PM] Sharon: because angst is delicious but also a twang of “ouch”
[8:06:07 PM] Sharon: what a cute baby
[8:06:24 PM] Louise: hehehe
[8:06:31 PM] Louise: i love your definition of cute
[8:06:54 PM] Sharon: i am aware that it’s very… eccentric
[8:07:00 PM] Sharon: *snort*
I SAW YOU LIKING THAT POST, INKY. >:U
I just felt like mentioning that lookin’ at yer stuff has been a factor in drawing this dealio. :Ic
FFFF. You know what. After this’n. And if I think of something. :Ic
But shh… I’m going to go nap/sleep now for realzies (just couldn’t do so in living room, so relocated everything to my room; was listening to the stereo the whole time of it.)
Things still hurt too much to do stuff.
Hope you and the rest of m’ followers have a good’n and see ya whenevers.
- Choke. Just think about it, seriously. Think about what choking is and imagine speaking while it’s happening. That would fuckin’ hurt, man.
- Hiss. Look, it’s just not possible, okay? No matter how “evil” you want your character to seem.
- Snarl. Animals snarls. The Beast from Beauty and the Beast snarls. The Hulk snarls. You know who doesn’t snarl? PEOPLE WHEN THEY’RE SPEAKING.
- Shriek. Come on, 99% of the time, “shriek” is not the word you want.Let’s face it: if you put an exclamation point at the end of the sentence, your reader gets the picture. Don’t bring to mind banshees and screaming toddlers.
- Sneer. I’m not even going to bother explaining this one. “SNEER” ISN’T EVEN A SOUND.
Choked is not meant to be taken literally, an obstruction in the throat. It means they’re having difficultly speaking, they’re forcing the words out with difficulty. Often used when the character is convulsed in tears or laughter.
Hiss is a low, threatening whisper. Raw, guttural, vicious. It is NOT a literal hiss like an animal, it is a tone of voice that serves the same function. Someone will hiss that they’re going to cut your throat- a message from one person to the other.
Snarl is the same kind of thing. Not literal, it’s a tone of voice that serves the same function. It’s raw and gutteral like a hiss, but more savage than vicious. It’s loud, it’s showy, it’s intimidating. It’s very alpha male, big man, look at how fucking dangerous I am. I’ll take ALL of you on. Even if they’re snarling at one person in particular, nobody better back them up or they’re gonna get fucked up too.
Shriek. Come on, seriously? We’ve all heard people shriek either in fear or outrage. High pitched, loud, out of control, feminine. Men can shriek, but it’s funny and emasculating. Think angry italian women throwing pots and pans or ladies on tables who just saw a mouse.
Sneering is contempt whether it’s a facial expression or a tone of voice or both. There are a hundred different ways to sneer with your voice, but it all adds up to the same thing.
How descriptive words work 101